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    bikedrill
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    Hi! I’ve been using Textfugu since Sept 2013 so I’m still a newbie and REALLY NERVOUS HAHAHaaa.. Anyway, I’m in season 4 and I thought I’d post up some of my worksheet sentences for corrections and advice.

    きのう は みじかかった です。(Yesterday was short)
    ボビーさん の しずかな犬 は ふるい です。(Bobby’s quiet dog is old.)
    おもしろいえいが を みました (I saw an interesting movie)
    まずいビール を のみました (I drank gross tasting beer)
    にほんご の せんせい は こわくない です。(Japanese teacher is not scary)
    ともだち は かわいい です。(Friend is cute)
    とうきょう は とおい ですか?(Is tokyo far?)
    にぎやかなとうきょう に いきます!(I will go to lively Tokyo!)
    さちこさん は いそがしくなかった です。(Sachiko is not busy)
    この すし は きれい です。(This sushi is pretty.)
    あの すし は つめたい です。(That sushi (over there) is cold to the touch.)
    マクドナルド は おいしくない。(McDonalds is not delicious…… except for maybe Mcgriddles. Those are very おいしい。)
    TextFugu は べんり と やすいです。(Textfugu is cheap and convenient.)
    これつまらないエッセイ を かきました (I wrote this boring essay.)
    今日は 悪いです。(Today is bad.)

    m(_ _)m ありがとうございます。

    #43266

    Joel
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    さちこさん は いそがしくなかった です。(Sachiko is not busy)

    This says “was not busy”.

    TextFugu は べんり と やすいです。(Textfugu is cheap and convenient.)

    Unfortunately, that’s not how you conjoin adjectives. と is for nouns and noun phrases only. For adjectives, you need to use the て-form.

    これつまらないエッセイ を かきました (I wrote this boring essay.)

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    Otherwise they pretty much look fine. =)

    #43269

    Anonymous

    You can post your sentences on Lang-8 to get even more corrections.

    #43277

    bikedrill
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    Ahhh thank you Tsetycoon13, I went and made an account on lang-8, that should help a ton. Joel, thanks much for the corrections. I was expecting to have WAY more wrong with these than just the corrections you made tbh. \o/

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